Night Mistress

ohhh... so that richard guy was one of her suitors. and what's with helena? at the beginning at the story, she seems to be falling in love with james, but ...

uh no.... i have a feeling that this is going to get all tangle up with Lucy falling for Issac and Helena falling for Simon. and what was James going ...

you need to slowly down the dancing. it was too quickly for my taste, unless it was an upbeat dance. I also have the feeling that James is a suitor. ...

Is this handsome lord one of her suitors? ! guess I will have to read the whole story to found out, won't I? I am really liking your story. I ...

i wonder why James was so rude to Sophia. and oh, i hope Helena isn't in love with James if he's one of the suitor for Sophia. i don't want ...

ohhh. i have a feeling that James is one of those Suitors chosen for Sophia. grrh, i have to read the others to found out. :grumbles: it's a good thing ...

oh wow. i seems kind of cruel that she has to guess who her suitors are and that she has to move out of her house, the one she grew ...

ohhh cool. it's not everyday that the daughter is listed into the fortune becaus eof her her being a female. i have a feel that this is going to be ...

i got goosebump when i read the last line. it's seem good, but i should go and read the others chapter that you have post. now, i am off to ...

ohhh. i don't like her parents. you would think they would stay around and see if their daughter is going to pull though. Lana, she is really sweet, but she ...

ummmm...they could still be together even thought his brother and her sister are together. i know that kinda of sick. i don't see anything wrong with this chapter. But can ...

oohhhh, i could pracically smell teh strawberries in the began. the scene was beautiful describe. so charlie and lana are now friends, but i am getting hte feeling that they ...

dude, you can't leave it like that. first of all, Ash is a meanie for using Colin like that. he genuine care for her. and seond, what she going to ...

dude, this is not good for me!!! now i am thinking of way for your story on mine. but anyways.... i loved it. Sophia and Micheal are becoming close, aren't ...

oh, wow. looks like the Coven is breaking apart. I hate rebecca and the others that agreed with her. Philips seems like a caring leader. I hope Philips keeps the ...